===“At this time, the women of the Illinois House Democratic Women’s Caucus will not support the proposed gaming bill until drafters remove language that allows any state revenues collected to be given to sports team owners and their respective leagues.”===
Is this brick still in place?
To the ad,
It’s a B-, C+
Why?
The premise that one gaming interest has the betterment of the state over another… in their logic… it’s a bit far fetched
“It’s about the dollars, always the dollars”
It’s disappointing.
This ad is like…
“Which one of the Five Families is more concerned about Illinois.”
At this point a B- is generous.
- Peoples Republic of Oak Park - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:21 pm:
There must be way many more sports gamblers that I knew about. The ad isn’t terrible but how many Illinoisans are engaged enough in this inside baseball issue for this large a buy to be noticed, or effective, or worthwhile?
Wow, that ad is awful. The voice over is my favorite part. Were they too cheap to pay for professional voice talent and just grabbed Bob the coffee boy to do it for them? Geez.
I give it a C for content but a D- for production values.
Meh. A waste of a million on a subject that like 1% of Illinoisans know anything about. And spending $1 million on this ad is apparently a million more than they’ve paid in state taxes.
- Dance Band on the Titanic - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:46 pm:
Poor. The images don’t make sense for the messaging…what do oil workers have to do with gaming? Does little to capture interest or explain why the average person should care. Even if they did care, there is no call to action and the website to go to remains onscreen for less than a second.
This ad, language, logic, it still doesn’t help that caucus with what their beef appears to be.
So, they run this ad… asking folks which of the Five Families cares about Illinois more… ya think there’s enough in this ad to compel action and change the minds of that caucus?
As others have noted, TV is a wasteful strategy and this spot is pretty bad. Way too blabby, cut-and-paste stock footage of nothing in particular, tiny website visual call-to-action at end.
Couple of strange things:
1. What big boat is that at the beginning, and where is it supposed to be? Do these guys realize that Illinois “riverboats” don’t actually go chugging out on the waters?
2. This line — “But there is a casino owned by a billionaire that wants to keep them out…” is looped in. Give it a listen; it’s the same voiceover talent, but the voice sounds way different than the rest of the spot, even the rest of that sentence. I don’t think it was from the same recording session.
My guess is that a direct shot at “billionaire” Bluhm wasn’t in the original “finished” spot and was looped in after the fact.
If you’re spending a million bucks, just have him lay down the whole script again, already.
It’s not terrific at all. The production values would indicate they spent some dough making this. But as pointed out previously, there’s an odd disconnect between the script and the visuals, and the script isn’t a concise narrative to begin with. This should have been seriously revised in the storyboarding phase.
That being said, the Governor intervened, so it got under someone’s skin quickly and deeply. That would indicate “it was good enough”.
- The Captain - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:13 pm:
They shouldn’t have let a technocrat write that script, it’s awful. I didn’t bother watching the video once I read the script.
- Oswego Willy - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:16 pm:
===“At this time, the women of the Illinois House Democratic Women’s Caucus will not support the proposed gaming bill until drafters remove language that allows any state revenues collected to be given to sports team owners and their respective leagues.”===
Is this brick still in place?
To the ad,
It’s a B-, C+
Why?
The premise that one gaming interest has the betterment of the state over another… in their logic… it’s a bit far fetched
“It’s about the dollars, always the dollars”
It’s disappointing.
This ad is like…
“Which one of the Five Families is more concerned about Illinois.”
At this point a B- is generous.
- Peoples Republic of Oak Park - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:21 pm:
Why are the Super Fans not involved in this ad.
- lakeside - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:24 pm:
Too wordy. Like Cap, I lost interest before I got to the end of the text. C
- Responsa - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:29 pm:
There must be way many more sports gamblers that I knew about. The ad isn’t terrible but how many Illinoisans are engaged enough in this inside baseball issue for this large a buy to be noticed, or effective, or worthwhile?
- Chicago Cynic - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:36 pm:
Wow, that ad is awful. The voice over is my favorite part. Were they too cheap to pay for professional voice talent and just grabbed Bob the coffee boy to do it for them? Geez.
I give it a C for content but a D- for production values.
- Shytown - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:39 pm:
Meh. A waste of a million on a subject that like 1% of Illinoisans know anything about. And spending $1 million on this ad is apparently a million more than they’ve paid in state taxes.
- Not Again - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:41 pm:
2/1 they overspent on that garbage ad.
- Dance Band on the Titanic - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 4:46 pm:
Poor. The images don’t make sense for the messaging…what do oil workers have to do with gaming? Does little to capture interest or explain why the average person should care. Even if they did care, there is no call to action and the website to go to remains onscreen for less than a second.
- Rich Miller - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 5:01 pm:
A million dollars could have bought them one HECK of a blog ad that would’ve actually reached their targeted audience. Just sayin… lol
- Oswego Willy - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 5:05 pm:
===A million dollars could have bought them one HECK of a blog ad that would’ve actually reached their targeted audience. Just sayin===
This is correct.
The “worry” should be the Illinois House Democratic Women’s Caucus, not folks at home wondering why the Rivers Casino ran another ad during… whatever.
- Oswego Willy - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 5:08 pm:
To add, apologies,
This ad, language, logic, it still doesn’t help that caucus with what their beef appears to be.
So, they run this ad… asking folks which of the Five Families cares about Illinois more… ya think there’s enough in this ad to compel action and change the minds of that caucus?
But, it’s not my million dollars…
- wordslinger - Thursday, May 23, 19 @ 7:39 pm:
As others have noted, TV is a wasteful strategy and this spot is pretty bad. Way too blabby, cut-and-paste stock footage of nothing in particular, tiny website visual call-to-action at end.
Couple of strange things:
1. What big boat is that at the beginning, and where is it supposed to be? Do these guys realize that Illinois “riverboats” don’t actually go chugging out on the waters?
2. This line — “But there is a casino owned by a billionaire that wants to keep them out…” is looped in. Give it a listen; it’s the same voiceover talent, but the voice sounds way different than the rest of the spot, even the rest of that sentence. I don’t think it was from the same recording session.
My guess is that a direct shot at “billionaire” Bluhm wasn’t in the original “finished” spot and was looped in after the fact.
If you’re spending a million bucks, just have him lay down the whole script again, already.
- Harvest76 - Friday, May 24, 19 @ 6:51 am:
Zzzzzzz. They should have hired someone more dynamic to voice this add. Was Michael Dukakis not available?
- wordslinger - Friday, May 24, 19 @ 8:58 am:
–At the governor’s request…–
Is that confirmed? I’d be curious as to what “request” was actually delivered and by whom, if so.
- A guy - Friday, May 24, 19 @ 9:07 am:
It’s not terrific at all. The production values would indicate they spent some dough making this. But as pointed out previously, there’s an odd disconnect between the script and the visuals, and the script isn’t a concise narrative to begin with. This should have been seriously revised in the storyboarding phase.
That being said, the Governor intervened, so it got under someone’s skin quickly and deeply. That would indicate “it was good enough”.
- OneMan - Friday, May 24, 19 @ 9:15 am:
YouTube show it was added to YouTube yesterday.
The whole ‘waste of a million dollars thing’, how long was this thing on the air? Did it even show up on TV?
I suspect the spend was a lot less than a million dollars and I agree with A guy on this, if the governor steped in that quick, it got the job done.
- Thems The Breaks - Friday, May 24, 19 @ 9:45 am:
It’s still running on WGN. I’ve seen it twice this morning.
- Ron Burgundy - Friday, May 24, 19 @ 12:55 pm:
Just saw it run on CNN (Xfinity).